For a service that helps designers succeed you should touch up' on your grammatical skills The second paragraph, wether and the prior one is whether also no commas or other punctuation. Not posting this to trash your service I think it's neat. But, hope you can do it better Also, I would advise not to repeat the same sentences, try wording it differently, example: We'll help you brand your art to help improve your sales revenue, whether you're promoting products or services. example: Our team will help you provide more trending ideas to help better your service. Hope this helps, Aladarr